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Death comes a-calling, are we still smiling Like a bliss mist, unfettered and unbound In joy we canter, heart our love centre Glowing in the life stream scintillating Within all storms still, as divine light fills Knowing death but merely transitioning Awareness continues, as life renews In each domain, soul unstained imbibing Love the common ground, in pastures new found Heart our love centre, in joy we canter Death Gods kind hand, enabling our merging 24-April-2021 Form: Abracadabra, syllable count/line=10 A new Abracadabra poem Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/24/2021 2:57:00 AM

Death is only scary because we have never experienced it.. it is the unknown we fear, yet we need not fear the unknown because it is known as heaven, a heavenly home. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/24/2021 3:04:00 AM

Ah! But unless we see heaven now, with eyes open, doubts will persist. Only a select few actually know, through directly imbibed wisdom. First realisation, only then true faith follows, otherwise it is a blind belief, shaky, when tested.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/24/2021 1:50:00 AM

I hope I'll be in a coma when I die.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/24/2021 3:02:00 AM