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Urban Sonnet

Invented by: Laura Loo. Sonnet form, with 10 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ABABBB- CDCDDD- EFEFFF-GG

Love is something that's intrigued you since birth, for it was a word that you seldom heard. And yet, you fantasize somewhere on Earth, someone loves you; though that may sound absurd. You sometimes hear whisperings of that word embedded in the tune of a songbird. You oft dream love awaits on distant shores, leaving you wondering if it is true. Perhaps you should leave this place love ignores, maybe it's time to move on, somewhere new. Pack your suitcase and bid this town adieu, and for once in your life, try something new. Travel, go see the world, follow your dreams; let your hair down; allow your light to shine. Take a chance; say goodbye to silent screams, and search for love's intimate telltale sign. Your future happiness is on the line; trust in yourself; let hope be your guideline. All you need to believe is that it's true, your soulmate is also looking for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/24/2018 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem about hopes and dreams. Well done!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/22/2018 8:13:00 AM
Well-done, Emile--especially the closing couplet. CONGRATS! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/22/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/22/2018 7:36:00 AM
Loved this, well done on your win. Faux
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/22/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Fauxcroft, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/18/2018 2:42:00 PM
Only we can make our dreams a reality, sometimes we just have to get up and seek them. Good luck Emile. Tom
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/18/2018 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/18/2018 1:47:00 PM
Great take on the challenge, Emile. Lovely write on hope, dreams and taking the plunge.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/18/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your continuous support my friend, Emile.

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