Paula Goldsmith Poet Lay

Our Home

Our home Is filled with thanks and love,
this we got from God up above.
The kitchen stove cooking away,
before eating we first must pray.
Let's go play on the sidewalk~talk,
draw with our box of colored chalk.
The fun day must come to an end,
pray for family and our friend.

 
Date Written:3/29/2022

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4. Home ~~ 8 HowManySyllables.com                                                    Form L - Lay - New Poetry Contest                                                    Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France April 8, 2022 at 1:41 PM Paula, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your poem ~Constance Paula Goldsmith April 9, 2022 at 9:57 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your Lay Contest. I enjoyed writing "Our Home." Have a great/blessed spring day/weekend................

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2022 at 4:06 AM Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this spiritually based winning work. Way to go. Sara Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2022 at 12:05 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my spiritually based write. Have a great/blessed day................

Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2022 at 9:37 AM Sp sweet! Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith April 6, 2022 at 12:11 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day................

Christuraj Alex April 4, 2022 at 7:06 AM "filled with thanks and love" - Best of homes. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2022 at 10:18 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. I did not know I had a win. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Wish all homes could be great but I know many are not. It is all up to the family that lives in them. Have a great/blessed day................

Mystic Rose Rose April 3, 2022 at 3:39 PM Your home is filled with love because you live in it and have your being, I love this, have a beautiful blessed day , always Vie Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2022 at 10:10 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you love this Home write. Home can be great or bad. It is all up to the family that lives in it. Have a great/blessed day................

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 3, 2022 at 11:44 AM The joys of a loving, prayerful home is beautifully described in your poem, Paula. Best of wishes for the contest. Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2022 at 10:08 AM Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my Home write. Have a great/blessed day................

Michael Tor April 2, 2022 at 7:42 PM Nice write Paula... Paula Goldsmith April 3, 2022 at 7:47 AM Thanks for your note and for the visit. Hope all is OK with you. Glad you like my "Our Home" write. Have a great/blessed day................

Bill Baker April 2, 2022 at 3:55 PM Well rhymed and written my friend. Have a joyful weekend, Paula. Hugs, Bill Good luck in the contest! Paula Goldsmith April 3, 2022 at 7:43 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day................

Delice Arleen Skelly April 2, 2022 at 5:22 AM Hello Paula, I posted my effort at a Lay this morning, went for Dream. See you employed a rhyme scheme which is a nice touch...Delice Paula Goldsmith April 2, 2022 at 9:06 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I will check out your page. Have a great/blessed day................

Valsa George March 30, 2022 at 7:19 PM I can imagine how happy is that home where love and gratitude fill and where God is given a prime place !Dear Paula, best of luck in the contest..... Paula Goldsmith April 2, 2022 at 9:05 AM Thanks for your note and for your best of luck. Glad you can imagine my "Our Home" write. It would be great if all homes were like this. Have a great/blessed day................

Sotto Poet March 29, 2022 at 8:17 PM Interesting writing Paula. The words were really well chosen! and the subject is very well exposed stunningly. Good luck in the contest Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2022 at 8:10 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Also thanks for your kind words. That made my day. Glad you like "Our Home" write. Have a great/blessed day................

Paulette Calasibetta March 29, 2022 at 2:41 PM Very sweet write Paula~ Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2022 at 8:07 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day................