Our Hideaway

Late afternoon – at twilight’s edge
we drift toward a secluded beach
on gentle waves of blue and green.

We leave the boat; then hand in hand,
along the sandy shore we stroll
as sky above gleams tangerine.

We see the cottage up ahead.
It seems as if sweet summer sighs
because we feel its cooling breeze.

Anticipation moves our feet.
We find ourselves outside the door.
A night of bliss we soon shall seize.

We hold each other as we watch
the final fading of sun’s gleam
into the sea; the day is done.

Night brings the moon and glitter stars.
Into our hideaway we go,
and joy prevails, for we are one.


July 30, 2019 for Emile pinet's Tri-Con Poetry Contest
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Chiri Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Andrea congrats on your top win!;)
Krampe Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. This sounds so peaceful.
Kauffman Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 1:19 AM
Such a lovely expression of love and intimacy in this poetic form with its simplicity and elegance! Congratualtions on your top placement!
Johnson Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Girl, you own romance. This is the epitome of every romantic dream anyone has ever had. <3 :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 12:03 AM
This romantic and lovely Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You must've put this up late because I didn't see it and I have been looking to see if you had written one. You honor my form with this lovely beauty! : ) xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win for this beautifully penned romantic poem. John
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very difficult contest to judge but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
Mcferran Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 9:03 PM
So beautifully done... Now I want a seaside cottage hideaway like that! ;)
Romios Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 4:25 PM
So wonderfully written. Really thought I was there with you. Panahiota
Anish Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Please take a look at my latest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Anish Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 12:50 PM
You are so prolific! Damn the critics - full speed ahead! Romantic work here - good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 8:48 AM
So romantic with joyful colors, a seaside cottage, cooling breeze and a couple of lovers. Enjoyed, dear Andrea!
Adams Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 8:05 AM
sounds the the perfect romantic getaway....beautifully penned :) hugs
Kumar Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Hey Andrea, I was away from soup for a bit and what a way to come back than read this absolute gem.
Godwin Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 4:07 AM
Oh take me there - sure the guys can come but the imagery and mood touched my own longing to be there. Lately, I've felt Autumn waiting in the wings and I long for one more summer getaway! Lovely work. I think this contest has closed without a thing from me but I really am cool with that. You should place well. Love you ... CayCay
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 2:28 AM
Could just imagine the scene Andrea, sounds bliss. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Lovely write! Beauty from your pen, sweet lady!
Pandit Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Excellent flow and rhythmic tone..beautiful imagery..all the best Andrea.
Parker Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:59 PM
romance at its best...good luck
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:56 PM
oh how romantic is this Andrea what a sweet poem, the imagery is so beautiful. I hope your grand daughter learns from you and you mentor her with her poetry!:-) hugs jan xx
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