Notes About The Poem

Our Happy Home


Long hours spent over the dirty laundry
Mum knew hard work
was something
worthwhile
with
sweet
flavors
providing
whispers of hope
within the borders of our happy home












Double Tetractys 6 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Image inspiration is Number 2
November 17, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 3:23 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Instilling hope is a precious talent of a good Mum, above and beyond all the other hard work she does. Your poem's beautiful nostalgia brings me to the center of this happy home, dearest Regina. Congratulations for your excellent win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Hi Gina. I love "...Mum knew hard work was something worthwhile..." Congratulations on the win! Linda
Kauffman Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Gina, what a lovely remembrance of your "mum" and the life lessons of service she taught you in the simple, humble work of her hands. Makes me think of a humble carpenter shop and the hands that created perfect wheels within the confines of a family and home! Congratulations dear friend on your win! May this season bless your home!
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 4:27 PM
what a sweet poem, many congrats on your win Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Chamberlain Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 12:41 AM
We have it easy with laundry, in the machine and turn it on. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Beautiful verse, Regina. Thank you for participating in the contest. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 3:16 AM
Hi Regina, What a well-written nostalgic piece. It took me back down memory lane.Excellent job! Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Agustin Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 12:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this, making me remember my dear Mama with her flat iron of charcoal. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. All the more, thanks for your friendship and I thank the Lord for such. God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 11:40 AM
- A mother works more than seven hours a day ... no one hears her complain ... she does it for love, Gina :) - A lovely poem, luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Great one, lady Pangie
Dome Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:24 AM
A labor of love.Yes hard work, a lot less today through our labor-saving devices. Love this and the picture. Hope you win. Take care.
One Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Most mums know about hard work and you described it very well..
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 6:41 AM
...and a sweet write, Regina.
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