Our Glass
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so I took a shot at a double stanza'd hourglass shape poem.
OUR GLASS
they claim it a myth
time running out
slowly
until
it
crushes
us together
in the final frenzy
ageless grains of sand
spinning into another dimension
free falling strangers
reaching for
eternity’s
now
freed
to know
the myth’s truth
was creation’s promise
42 words
©5/13/2017
submitted to ONE of FIVE-70 – Poetry contest
Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2017
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