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Our Garden In my mind’s eye, I see you still, Standing still in our garden, Motionless, Deep in thought. So what were you thinking? The seeds we planted together, Grew strong, We tended them, Fed and watered them, Gave them shelter and support. We watched anxiously. Now they are strong, gloriously confident, They no longer need our tender loving care. The scarlet poppies, petals as fragile as crepe paper, Grow miraculously strong on delicate stems. The marigolds, like a cluster of brilliant suns, Know their power. The trailing lobelias explore exuberantly And will not be contained. The seed of our love we also planted together, Tended with the same loving care and understanding, And at first a willingness to forgive. But in time, as it grew, it too needed protection, From sudden tempests, sudden frosts, And tears that felt like rain. Desperately we provided support and protection, But it was never enough. The seed which at first had grown so joyfully, Now withered And died.

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Date: 12/23/2023 9:50:00 AM
sadly so much is temporary in life.. This is deep and emotive writing..
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Alison Douglas
Date: 12/24/2023 3:51:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate the feedback.
Date: 12/23/2023 9:15:00 AM
Very sad the realities of life... And death. You illustrated this well, Alison
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Alison Douglas
Date: 12/24/2023 3:52:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Date: 12/23/2023 6:00:00 AM
This is so poignant and heartfelt and i love how you’ve used garden as a concept to convey how so much that was tended to with love patience understanding and care too eventually withers. I felt the melancholia and the depth of emotions conveyed here in such a seamless manner. Pleasure reading this.
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Alison Douglas
Date: 12/25/2023 5:14:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate the feedback. I feel encouraged as I haven’t written much recently so think I might try another poem. I have a vague idea that I could work on. Thanks again.

Book: Shattered Sighs