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Our First Glance

my pulsing heart race as our eyes gazed deep within each, aglow with hope.... your eyes, blue wonder.... your dress aglow with red warmth, fire and ice collide- our souls open wide with a glance of longing eyes, destiny had come.... __________________ A Falotico Contest

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Date: 3/28/2011 8:18:00 AM
chemisrty beyond words, rick! my eyes adore this piece... humbly thanking you for including me in your extraordinary haiku contest list... winning's best for this explosive work of art! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/25/2011 3:22:00 PM
You have penned nice images to convey meeting of the eyes first time, Rick
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Date: 3/25/2011 2:43:00 PM
oooh, so wonderful. Love how you melded the fire and ice images and that destiny had come is the ultimate ending!
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