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'our First Encounter'

our first encounter my hazel eyes pierced through yours an uneasy stare time had no factor you and me in a full room spellbound verbal eyes implied promises confirmed as heat emanate passion instigate "Eyes First Meet" contest by Wilma N. Neels 4th Place

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2011 10:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:25:00 PM

wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations, Wilma. Good to see you near the top!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 6:23:00 AM

Many Congratulations Wilma on this super win---kash

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 1:50:00 AM

wonderful winner wilma, love all three of these, congrats. Harry

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:48:00 AM

Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Wilma. Wonderful string Senryu. Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/1/2011 11:59:00 PM

& super congrats!! sorry I thought I typed that in-- :D maybe I need to sleep some more???

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/1/2011 11:58:00 PM

ei, I missed out on reading this one, missy! but I sure am so happy to see this in the winners' list-- I love that line "spellbound verbal eyes" wow- that says A LOT! way to go missy! Hope you're having a good weekend :D --hugs to you :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/1/2011 9:39:00 PM

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Wilma.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations on a geat win Wilma. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:13:00 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your amazing 4th Place win in Michael's Contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 2:53:00 PM

CHEERS for winning well in the contest, wilma... grrreat stuff! :) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:35:00 PM

I knew this spellbinding write would be a winner, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:22:00 PM

Congrtats my dear friend in the sky with your win in my contest..love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:19:00 PM

Super congrats Wilma my friend on your 4th place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..

James Fraser

Date: 3/30/2011 12:56:00 PM

Terrific poetry Wilma, beautifully written. Good luck in the contest....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 10:18:00 PM

What a great staredown!! Me likes!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/27/2011 12:52:00 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest on the love at first sight, Wilma. Good luck

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2011 10:19:00 AM

Very nice, Wilma!! Especially like the way you describe being "spellbound" by his verbal eyes. This is a grea entry for Michael's contest. Wishing you success, dear. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2011 5:56:00 AM

ahhh, the freshness of eyes knowing the soul's needs, wilma... a heart-tugging piece so subtely rendered! winning wishes to you! :) hugggs!