Wilma Neels Poet Senryu

'our First Encounter'

our first encounter
my hazel eyes pierced through yours 
an uneasy stare 

time had no factor 
you and me in a full room 
spellbound verbal eyes 

implied promises 
confirmed as heat emanate
passion instigate





"Eyes First Meet" contest 
by Wilma N. Neels 

4th Place

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Jack Horne April 4, 2011 at 10:56 AM Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:49 AM Congratulations on your win Wilma in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:25 PM wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest Wilma

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2011 at 2:03 PM Congratulations, Wilma. Good to see you near the top!

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 6:23 AM Many Congratulations Wilma on this super win---kash

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 1:50 AM wonderful winner wilma, love all three of these, congrats. Harry

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 1:48 AM Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Wilma. Wonderful string Senryu. Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 1, 2011 at 11:59 PM & super congrats!! sorry I thought I typed that in-- :D maybe I need to sleep some more???

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 1, 2011 at 11:58 PM ei, I missed out on reading this one, missy! but I sure am so happy to see this in the winners' list-- I love that line "spellbound verbal eyes" wow- that says A LOT! way to go missy! Hope you're having a good weekend :D --hugs to you :)

Tahera Mannan April 1, 2011 at 9:39 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Wilma.

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 6:00 PM Congratulations on a geat win Wilma. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 4:14 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:13 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 2:54 PM Congratulations on your amazing 4th Place win in Michael's Contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 2:53 PM CHEERS for winning well in the contest, wilma... grrreat stuff! :) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:35 PM I knew this spellbinding write would be a winner, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:22 PM Congrtats my dear friend in the sky with your win in my contest..love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:19 PM Super congrats Wilma my friend on your 4th place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..

James Fraser March 30, 2011 at 12:56 PM Terrific poetry Wilma, beautifully written. Good luck in the contest....:)

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2011 at 10:18 PM What a great staredown!! Me likes!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 27, 2011 at 12:52 PM Wonderful entry to the contest on the love at first sight, Wilma. Good luck

Carolyn Devonshire March 27, 2011 at 10:19 AM Very nice, Wilma!! Especially like the way you describe being "spellbound" by his verbal eyes. This is a grea entry for Michael's contest. Wishing you success, dear. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud March 27, 2011 at 5:56 AM ahhh, the freshness of eyes knowing the soul's needs, wilma... a heart-tugging piece so subtely rendered! winning wishes to you! :) hugggs!