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'our First Encounter'

our first encounter
my hazel eyes pierced through yours 
an uneasy stare 

time had no factor 
you and me in a full room 
spellbound verbal eyes 

implied promises 
confirmed as heat emanate
passion instigate





"Eyes First Meet" contest 
by Wilma N. Neels 

4th Place

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 4/4/2011 10:56:00 AM Congrats on your win : ) Jack Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 5:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win Wilma in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 4/3/2011 7:25:00 PM wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest Wilma Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/2/2011 2:03:00 PM Congratulations, Wilma. Good to see you near the top! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/2/2011 6:23:00 AM Many Congratulations Wilma on this super win---kash Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/2/2011 1:50:00 AM wonderful winner wilma, love all three of these, congrats. Harry Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/2/2011 1:48:00 AM Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Wilma. Wonderful string Senryu. Lainie Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/1/2011 11:59:00 PM & super congrats!! sorry I thought I typed that in-- :D maybe I need to sleep some more??? Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/1/2011 11:58:00 PM ei, I missed out on reading this one, missy! but I sure am so happy to see this in the winners' list-- I love that line "spellbound verbal eyes" wow- that says A LOT! way to go missy! Hope you're having a good weekend :D --hugs to you :) Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/1/2011 9:39:00 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Wilma. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/1/2011 6:00:00 PM Congratulations on a geat win Wilma. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/1/2011 4:14:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/1/2011 3:13:00 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/1/2011 2:54:00 PM Congratulations on your amazing 4th Place win in Michael's Contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/1/2011 2:53:00 PM CHEERS for winning well in the contest, wilma... grrreat stuff! :) huggs! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/1/2011 2:35:00 PM I knew this spellbinding write would be a winner, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/1/2011 2:22:00 PM Congrtats my dear friend in the sky with your win in my contest..love Michael Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/1/2011 2:19:00 PM Super congrats Wilma my friend on your 4th place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv.. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/30/2011 12:56:00 PM Terrific poetry Wilma, beautifully written. Good luck in the contest....:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/28/2011 10:18:00 PM What a great staredown!! Me likes! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/27/2011 12:52:00 PM Wonderful entry to the contest on the love at first sight, Wilma. Good luck Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/27/2011 10:19:00 AM Very nice, Wilma!! Especially like the way you describe being "spellbound" by his verbal eyes. This is a grea entry for Michael's contest. Wishing you success, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/27/2011 5:56:00 AM ahhh, the freshness of eyes knowing the soul's needs, wilma... a heart-tugging piece so subtely rendered! winning wishes to you! :) hugggs! Login to Reply