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October’s second half brings us new rains, Copious and pouring with sodden days. Torrential it turns and then it but wanes, Our winter sets in with less of sun’s blaze. But for cool nights, sans bark and bite it stays, Efforts at birth control take a nosedive, Respite from high heat is all we derive. ** Acrostic/ Rhyme Royal Contest: "Fall is around the corner" sponsored by CAROL BROWN By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 01 sept 11

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Date: 9/7/2011 11:56:00 PM
Interesting take on fall where you live. Thanks for sharing. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,,Nair
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:44:00 PM
Oh, hot in the cool! Well done! Congrats, Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:03:00 PM
Jag, A pleasure to see! Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:40:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:04:00 PM
hey Jag congrats on your win, loved it..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:42:00 PM
Excellent acrostic, S. This is one of the most "poetic sounding" acrostics I've ever read. Love the line about the torrential raains that wane and the way you were able to make it rhyme. Great write! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:21:00 PM
there you fo, jag..… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congrats Jag on third place win with this cool wwrite on Fall luv.. another dynamo piece ...
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:46:00 AM
I hope I am remembering this right. YOu are JOey,right?(or not?) I really like this one of yours. Some great descriptions in it and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/2/2011 12:42:00 AM
A real nice acrostic,... especially because I'm an October baby... thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:10:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jag. Love, Carol
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