Our Existence

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" OUR EXISTENCE "FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 19 JANUARY 2018, ©

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A frail boat our transient existence seems to be Sailing over an ocean of tears of grief and joy Daily we are toiling on the course our ship to keep By succeeding the precepts God gave us to employ! © Demetrios Trifiatis 19 January 2018

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/19/2018 4:08:00 PM

It is quite the harrowing journey. Well expressed my friend.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/19/2018 8:36:00 AM

Beautifully penned my friend! Much love xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/19/2018 12:36:00 PM

You so kind my dear friend, Maureen ! Thank you so much.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/19/2018 6:38:00 AM

Transient in grief and joy..well written my friend..lets hope we follow the God's message.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/19/2018 7:05:00 AM

It will best to follow God's path if we wish to survive my friend, Vijay! Thank you so much!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2018 5:31:00 AM

If only everyone took heed of your beautiful, powerful words. Wouldn't the world be a much better place to live in. Regards Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/19/2018 7:04:00 AM

May your words be heard my friend, Tom! Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2018 4:21:00 AM

- Every day is a gift ... and every day has new challenges ... some brings tear others a smile ... - A wonderful poem, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/19/2018 7:03:00 AM

Dearest, Anne-Lise , thank you for your sound comment! Hugs xxx