Our Destiny Is the Dirt


Everybody’s destiny is the dirt
Only question is:
Who’s gonna get buried first
Everybody’s last trip is into the earth
Only question is:
Who’s gonna leave away first

Each decision you make
carries a lot of weight
Some seem big, real important ... 
some seem small, of no significance
But a ticket number is assigned to each one;
the larger the number, the longer the days
Yet, someone has to pull the short straw
	Fate and chance — 
wrong house   ...   wrong party   ...   wrong dance
One wrong decision,
and the Reaper with the grim look
got a sickle ready to sever you from the Vine
	Man-made design or Divine — 
wrong café   ...   wrong table   ...   wrong choice of wine
But the decision you made today was a close call,
God’s mercy lengthened your short straw
Another day given,
a delayed encore to the morality play
More time extension
to examine your life, and change some things
But somebody got a purchased ticket
to get sent away

Everybody’s destiny is the dirt
Only question is:
Who’s gonna get buried first
Everybody’s final destination 
is six feet under the earth
Only question is:
Who’s gonna arrive there first

Crossing the line of right and wrong
never meant much to some
Swerving back and forth in life like a drunk
But today wasn’t a good day to drive;
if you had stayed sober, you might still be alive
Bad decision on your part,
now there’s a widow with children
crying out their heart
And you over there playing them gangster games,
flashing the gun, taking other people things
Ill gotten gain now in your coveted possession
Today you were granted your death wish obsession
You ran across somebody with a bigger gun,
who had an even bigger anger itch to kill someone
Terrible decision you made,
put your bullet-riddled body in a pauper’s grave

Everybody’s destiny is the dirt
Only question is:
Who’s gonna get buried first
Everybody’s gotta ticket paid for 
by their sinful deeds on this earth
Only question is:
Who’s gonna get their’s punched first

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/13/2017 7:09:00 PM
Nice Poem. Yet through Christ we have hope in the Second coming and the resurrection. Amen, www.jesuschristvisitation.net
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:53:00 PM
Tough enough Freddie, well done.
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:45:00 PM
Double wows for me!Ans I agreed with Alexis here, truthful write ! Freddie, you sure got us thinking where we stand, well at least myself :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/24/2017 1:22:00 PM
Ty, Akkina. Got me thinking as well. Lol! Love the support given. Love and peace, my dear friend.
Date: 7/24/2017 12:13:00 PM
WOW! FREDDIE, This is a hard hitting "in yo face " truthful write. It was a thought provoking write. That causes the reader to think about the "state " of their life. All of our days are numbered and as you so skillfully penned" our destination is dirt." Excellent " wake up call" write-:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/24/2017 1:06:00 PM
Ty, Alexis. So good to hear from you again. Your honest comments mean a whole lot to me. Hope all is well w/you and yours. Love and joy always.
Date: 7/24/2017 9:55:00 AM
"Wow" - Tell it how it is "Freddie" and scare us all to "Hell" - I'm sitting here in judgement waiting the toll of the bell - Brilliant write - Indiana x x x
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/24/2017 11:06:00 AM
Ty, Indiana. I appreciate your glowing comments. Tough love must be applied from time to time, every loving parent knows that. As a nursing fatherly shepherd to all lost sheep, I gotta scare 'em straight sometimes, y'know. Stop on by any time. Love and peace always.
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