Our Apple Tree

An apple tree in our orchard
was blown over by a winter storm.
We let it lay there,
knowing it could do no harm.
Early the spring blossoms
started to appear--
then one windy day
the blossoms started to disappear.

We knew the roots were not deep enough 
to keep hold blossoms there:
so too it is with life.
We must have our roots planted deep
to have the security we can keep--
our lives are full of blossoms 
whose fragrance we love to share
and by doing this-- it is our way
to show others that we really care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:56 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Ida - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Carber Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations, Ida, on a profound poem expressed with true humility-- something quite rare nowadays.
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful, Ida. Congrats on your top win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Aloha from me too Ida. I enjoyed your poem and your humble message. Congratulations on your win! : )
Leffanta Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:45 PM
Well done, Ida! Aloha! Rico
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