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Ouch! A Crazy Day Out

so walking through the forest out walking on a walk passing tree after tree after tree then a tree showed me its bark interesting I thought and so too did my dog who excitedly barked back we had a crazy crazy walk the tree and my dog had a talk

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2024 3:32:00 AM

Ahh!! I guess the dog showed the tree who is boss. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/30/2024 4:01:00 AM

Thanks for reading Sara

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/30/2024 1:16:00 AM

This is cute - all the Scooby Doo scenery of the same trees passing by on a loop til we are deep in the forest and can do nothing but join you in your strange experience :) a job well done. We just need a bark translator now to find out what they said :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/30/2024 2:43:00 AM

I mean the poetry gods would make it alliterative, they wouldn't want to miss an opportunity like that! I'm going to listen out for squirrel sonnets today (spoiler alert it's about hiding nuts) and in a crazy twist it seems there have been long running wars because spiders wanted sonnets and ended up with senryu - they don't vibe with it Clive... Their only angst is the feud over sonnets.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/30/2024 1:55:00 AM

Well according to my poem Unsung Poets... of a few days ago the dog was reciting his poetry and in the spirit of that poem for the dog a didactic and for the tree a tercet. Probably. Might not have been, we'll never know.