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07/26/23

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Dusty musty air hit me as I open the attic door. Turning on small torch, I pause whilst my eyes gently get acclimatised to the dim light. Brushing away the long cobwebs which hang from the low ceiling, I cautiously make my way to the back of the attic. In a dark corner I find Granny’s old ottoman, its pink damask silk top is now worn and faded. Carefully I begin to raise the lid, its hinges creak like granny’s arthritic knees. I gently lift out her silk wedding dress which, as a child, I’d help granny wrap in layers of crinkly tissue paper. She had always promised I will wear it one day, and as she’s a gifted seamstress I know it will fit perfectly on my June wedding day. family heirloom I’ll wear on my wedding day precious memories

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Date: 8/2/2023 5:11:00 PM
Precious memories expressed in wonderful imagery Jan. No caca here! ;)
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Date: 7/29/2023 3:26:00 AM
What a delightful picture of the attic you found Jan. Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/29/2023 1:30:00 AM
Indeed, "precious memories" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 2:05:00 AM
Unfortunately its pure fiction, i never had grandparents just a step step grandmother. hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2023 6:27:00 PM
A great descriptive write, Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/29/2023 12:53:00 AM
thanks so much Kim xx
Date: 7/27/2023 2:32:00 AM
What a beautiful Haibun Jan, just lovely… Belle
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Belle, proof I'm not just a poop poet but some on here think differently lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2023 2:04:00 AM
Awesome imagery and I was there with you, Jan:)
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Date: 7/27/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Jo I was worried I had got it wrong as I had no comments till now:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/26/2023 3:56:00 PM
I felt as if I too was lifting up the creaky lid and laying my eyes on this heirloom!
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Date: 7/27/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Kim I hope Constance likes it:-) hugs jan xx
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