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O word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

07/26/23

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Ottoman

Dusty musty air hit me as I open the attic door. Turning on small torch, I pause whilst my eyes gently get acclimatised to the dim light. Brushing away the long cobwebs which hang from the low ceiling, I cautiously make my way to the back of the attic. In a dark corner I find Granny’s old ottoman, its pink damask silk top is now worn and faded. Carefully I begin to raise the lid, its hinges creak like granny’s arthritic knees. I gently lift out her silk wedding dress which, as a child, I’d help granny wrap in layers of crinkly tissue paper. She had always promised I will wear it one day, and as she’s a gifted seamstress I know it will fit perfectly on my June wedding day. family heirloom I’ll wear on my wedding day precious memories
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Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 5:11 PM
Precious memories expressed in wonderful imagery Jan. No caca here! ;)
Volumes Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 3:26 AM
What a delightful picture of the attic you found Jan. Congrats on your win
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 1:30 AM
Indeed, "precious memories" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 2:05 AM
Unfortunately its pure fiction, i never had grandparents just a step step grandmother. hugs jan xx
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 6:27 PM
A great descriptive write, Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 12:53 AM
thanks so much Kim xx
Edmonds  Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:32 AM
What a beautiful Haibun Jan, just lovely… Belle
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Belle, proof I'm not just a poop poet but some on here think differently lol:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:04 AM
Awesome imagery and I was there with you, Jan:)
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Jo I was worried I had got it wrong as I had no comments till now:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:56 PM
I felt as if I too was lifting up the creaky lid and laying my eyes on this heirloom!
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Kim I hope Constance likes it:-) hugs jan xx
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