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“Other Worlds They have not Lived” Writers, and poets, just like musicians feel they have the pulse of things, it’s an arrogance that declares I know, so much more than you, I know of such things, so much better than you. I have lived more of a life, I have a deeper capacity to feel. The reader watches the dance, and thinks - no, no you don’t know better than I, nor would you ever want to. There is a lightness in the limerick a joie de vivre innocent, macabre or satire, but underneath the undertow there rises more mysterious darker things that lift you up towards some luminocity, even if one exists stagnant in the in-between - their words like lines cast, make your heart swell and like an ocean they pull you back in. You'd gladly drown in their verbosity. To write the story one must live, to write the story one must read, to read, one must concede, there are other worlds one has never lived, nor will ever live. (LadyLabyrinth / 2023) “While he writes, I feel as if he is drawing me; or not drawing me, drawing on me-- drawing on my skin-- not with the pencil he is using, but with an old-fashioned goose pen, and not with the quill end but with the feather end. As if hundreds of butterflies have settled all over my face, and are softly opening and closing their wings. But underneath that is another feeling, a feeling of being wide-eyed awake and watchful. It's like being wakened suddenly in the middle of the night, by a hand over your face, and you sit up with your heart going fast, and no one is there. And underneath that is another feeling still, a feeling like being torn open; not like a body of flesh, it is not painful as such, but like a peach; and not even torn open, but ripe and splitting open of its own accord. And inside the peach there's a stone.” ("Alias Grace"/Margaret Atwood)

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Date: 3/21/2023 7:51:00 AM
Spherical vision
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/21/2023 12:43:00 PM
certainly not tunnel vision...
Date: 3/20/2023 11:43:00 AM
personally, I find humanity boring, we seem to have the ability to destroy without thought or reason, and we kill off keystone species and then wonder why everything is dying around us, our arguments tend to pool around whom is smarter or more deserving of whatever particular chaos is going on, seems we have a rocket ship brain and a kite's ability to use it, we have taken this planet along with our minds and turned them into one big garbage dump of self-satisfaction
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/20/2023 3:02:00 PM
hmmm, no wonder people want to escape to other worlds. I'm all for interdimensional travel Parker. Perhaps the species much better cared for there, rocket brains or not. The Kites have a mind of their own, the ones let free from control. Viva la revolution, Poets Are Us. Regards The Unicorn.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/20/2023 3:01:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/unicorns_are_us_1523177
Date: 3/19/2023 8:11:00 AM
A fabulous write, and I love the snowy owl. ;) I plan to live this life, then move on to another. I'm not done yet. :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/19/2023 10:54:00 AM
So be it, as above, so below. It may depend though at which point in the recycling chain you stand in your contract and lesson. It may be there is some validity in the phrase "freedom of choice", ie, if you are at stage of completion, your request for a new contract will be granted, written and your new skin and assignment delivered.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/19/2023 10:54:00 AM
https://exploredeeply.com/live-your-purpose/appearance-of-the-great-white-snowy-owl-and-its-spiritual-significance-and-meaning-in-our-lives
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/19/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/18/2023 12:18:00 PM
I love reading your writes. Always Wonderful. Have a blessed/great day...............
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/19/2023 12:16:00 AM
I have a running joke, no Agapanthas on D-Day. I don't know about a 'pretty' write, I admire your optimism Paula. :) xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2023 3:42:00 PM
Agapantha looks like a pretty/delicate flower. Never seen one. I know if you write about it, then it will be a pretty write. Let me know so I can read it. Blessings................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 2:55:00 PM
I'm thinking about switching the Dandylion up for an Agapantha, trust me it will be entertaining, at the least. Even I wonder where my mind goes sometimes...
Date: 3/18/2023 6:37:00 AM
"The Consolations of Philosphy"/Max Richter.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 6:37:00 AM
https://youtu.be/OVFhzlR6fJY

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