Osculating Dreams

the last threads of darkness
stream across the horizon
through trails of a fading moon

i stand on its edge
allured in the shadows
of ocean's mist
spiraling in thoughts
i blush with dawn
aloft in the current
my dreams of you
touching back
as the waves
embrace my soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/11/2019 3:53:00 PM
Another gem from your golden pen, few write as you do...I mean very few...ok no one there I said it! Don't know how I missed this one!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much John...your comment made me smile, i guess i do sort of have my own style... my muse was all over the place that day, and many were penned, easy to miss them when she won't shut up.... hugs :)
Date: 10/9/2019 8:08:00 AM
This poem breathes softly and echoes quietly across the vast waters that you have so wonderfully painted. Another amazing poem.
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Date: 10/9/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thank you my friend...i so love the allure of both the ocean and the sunrise or sunsets....:) hugs
Date: 10/8/2019 3:13:00 PM
Beautiful weaving of the pictures with your verse. Poignantly penned, my friend. :) gw
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend...the ocean is my happy place, i would visit it every day if i could....i would write about it all the time if i could too but that would get boring to the readers quickly... hugs :)
Date: 10/7/2019 8:42:00 PM
This is another beauty for all. You're definitely a poet :) Blessed with artistic thoughts. God bless you and love and prayers, Gina
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 8:54:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I have always been taken by nature and learned how to show emotion through nature in many hues... hugs and blessings :)
Date: 10/7/2019 12:11:00 PM
Those last four lines bring this poem home, curling around the reader, showing pure love.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren :) hugs
Date: 10/7/2019 10:43:00 AM
oooh, so sensual and beautiful ~ I am imagining music in the background for this one, too... not sure what, but this one wants to take me with it ~ love it and the images <3 a fave, my friend :)
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Date: 10/7/2019 10:49:00 AM
i love the ocean...i have so many pictures of the rise over it, even a video with the dolphins at play as they tumble in the waves...it's my happy place and luckily only a few hours away! Thank you for your kind comments always my friend :) hugs
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