Home » Poems » Sandra Adams » Osculating Dreams

Osculating Dreams

the last threads of darkness stream across the horizon through trails of a fading moon i stand on its edge allured in the shadows of ocean's mist spiraling in thoughts i blush with dawn aloft in the current my dreams of you touching back as the waves embrace my soul

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

John Hamilton

Date: 10/11/2019 3:53:00 PM

Another gem from your golden pen, few write as you do...I mean very few...ok no one there I said it! Don't know how I missed this one!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 5:00:00 PM

Thank you so much John...your comment made me smile, i guess i do sort of have my own style... my muse was all over the place that day, and many were penned, easy to miss them when she won't shut up.... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2019 8:08:00 AM

This poem breathes softly and echoes quietly across the vast waters that you have so wonderfully painted. Another amazing poem.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/9/2019 8:36:00 AM

Thank you my friend...i so love the allure of both the ocean and the sunrise or sunsets....:) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/8/2019 3:13:00 PM

Beautiful weaving of the pictures with your verse. Poignantly penned, my friend. :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 7:50:00 PM

Thank you my friend...the ocean is my happy place, i would visit it every day if i could....i would write about it all the time if i could too but that would get boring to the readers quickly... hugs :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/7/2019 8:42:00 PM

This is another beauty for all. You're definitely a poet :) Blessed with artistic thoughts. God bless you and love and prayers, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 8:54:00 PM

Thank you my friend, I have always been taken by nature and learned how to show emotion through nature in many hues... hugs and blessings :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/7/2019 12:11:00 PM

Those last four lines bring this poem home, curling around the reader, showing pure love.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 10/7/2019 10:43:00 AM

oooh, so sensual and beautiful ~ I am imagining music in the background for this one, too... not sure what, but this one wants to take me with it ~ love it and the images <3 a fave, my friend :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 10:49:00 AM

i love the ocean...i have so many pictures of the rise over it, even a video with the dolphins at play as they tumble in the waves...it's my happy place and luckily only a few hours away! Thank you for your kind comments always my friend :) hugs