Notes About The Poem

I have been enjoying looking at the flowers pictures from Demetrios Trifiatis garden -- they are outstanding and bring me great joy.

Now regarding this poem, I don’t believe we need another poem about Orchids but my heart is moved every time I linger and gape at their beauty.  So, here is my little contribution into the sea of Orchid poems.

 

As always -- Love Generously!!

 

David

Orchid

Orchid – 

Calling gently to my heart
Such beauty - delicate, exotic, graceful

Caressing my spirit
With a gentle colorful peace
Scenting the air – a sweet love breeze

A beacon of hope . . . of love
When sadness blankets my soul
When nights are long, cold and dark 
When days are filled with a misty grey fog

This flower standing resolute
Whispers the eternal promise 
Its beauty a glimpse into the eternal realm – creator God
A divine creation – a precious love-gift
Of a peace that lights up the sky

As my tears wash forth
My heart-pain is transformed into wisdom
My suffering into strength
My crippling fear into courage

One more time my glaze lingers
Bruised and battered, I breathe in . . . out
There!  I have move past the pain

To embrace love and forgiveness
To be strong and alive!

Orchid 

Calling gently to my heart
Such beauty - delicate, exotic, graceful







Love Generously ----  

David Meade
10/27/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 4:13 PM
So sweet and encouraging my friend.. Well done!!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Inspirational and superbly crafted my friend. Lovely sentiment! Best wishes, Keith
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 6:00 AM
Each word paints picture of hope, renewal, beauty.
Chircop Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 3:55 PM
An amazing poem giving us much strength...and hope for the beauty of peace and love. Your words carry flowers`perfume..Lovely and Welcome back.
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November 19, 2015 at 9:20 AM
David, I am also a lover of orchids - I never get enough:-)! There is such a beauty blooming on my office window and she sings her own song! This piece is such a lovely personification of the orchid that creatively exults the wonder of the flower in all its glory! A-7 for sure! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:54 PM
A rare beauty, both the orchid and this poem. The love comparison fits so well and was executed in style.... My fav line among the many-- "Whispers the eternal promise "
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Hello, DAvid. thanks for stopping by and visiting me yesterday!!
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November 16, 2015 at 1:18 PM
A beautiful, emotive poem, David! I'm so glad I chose it to read today. I missed your inspiring words...hugs, Rhonda
Meade Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 5:53 PM
You are most kind Rhonda, I have not been around much but your words lifted my heart tonight! All the best always!
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November 15, 2015 at 9:16 PM
Love this write and the messages within. Lovely and uplifting. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Beautiful David, very lovely poem.
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November 7, 2015 at 9:03 AM
You have most certainly loved generously with this piece.
Nunez Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 2:06 AM
Back to read this beauty, David. Did you enter this in the Favorite Flower Contest? I believe this will do well! Best, Kim
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 1:30 PM
wonderful poem of feelings and spiritual hope hugs eve
Callus Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Hi David! So good to see you back...posting a beautiful, pensive tribute to orchids...the flowers of eternal promise! #7 I too find pleasure in Demi's flowers...a miracle in a roof garden! ~ All the best, my friend. // paul
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November 5, 2015 at 9:41 PM
I wish I was a bee right about now. I love and inhale the imagery, to love and forgive, such beauty exfoliates once the pain becomes the past. Love the way you lift the misty grey fog... LINDA
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November 5, 2015 at 2:22 PM
This is a rather lovely poem, David. My very best regards! :) john
Anderson Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:23 PM
lovely!
Meade Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Like you!
Nunez Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:05 PM
"...and he has broken his silence..." Worth all the wait, David. Again, this write shows your sensitivity. Loved the line "Its beauty a glimpse into the eternal realm – creator God". Caught my breath with the imagery and the image of a man so in love with God that he is brought to tears by the sheer beauty of a flower. 7 and fav. hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 6:46 PM
just read your dessert comment to me: dark chocolate, cashews, and peanut butter . . . 7" OMG, I LOVE all of those. A man after my own heart!
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 6:35 PM
I see you really love this flower. THis is beautiful work and I am happy to see you post this newest poem at last!
Meade Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:15 PM
I am partial to Orchids and dancing Sunflowers!!
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 1:27 PM
A beacon of hope. It takes me away.
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October 28, 2015 at 11:08 AM
I'm overjoyed to see your lovely piece, David. You've been away far too long. I am also blessed by the pics that Demetrios posts. Each a breath of fresh air. I particularly am fond of Orchids as it's one of my nick names...Desert Orchid. Thanks for posting a lovely poem about this flower.
Meade Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Hi LO, Desert Orchid fits you well . . . you are a dear and faithful friend, even when I have gone silent. Big hugs
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October 28, 2015 at 7:20 AM
clever to use the word Orchid because it may sound as a name of the woman but then in some lines you mentioned something about a flowers beauty and all.. really clever!!! ~Olive Eloisa
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October 28, 2015 at 3:28 AM
It worth while waiting four months to read a poem of Orchid's beauty, my dearest friend, David! A seven! Thank you for enjoying my humble flowers!
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