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Orange sky paints the dawn Offers hues of gold too Outside birds are singing Orb of golden sun glows On the grass glistens dew Oak trees sway in the breeze Overhead, clouds float by 4-4-2021 Pleiades O Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 4/27/2021 8:04:00 PM
Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.
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Date: 4/11/2021 2:24:00 PM
Ahhh!! Very descriptive is this winner. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2021 12:53:00 PM
This poetry contest sounds like a lot of fun. I love you poem Joseph, a superb write which no doubt the sponsor took into regard, congratulations Joseph and hope you are keeping well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/7/2021 9:59:00 PM
Awesome entry and rewarded too. Great Poetry.
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:10:00 PM
Beautiful description, Joseph. congrats.
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Date: 4/7/2021 2:14:00 PM
Beautiful images! Joseph, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/6/2021 10:31:00 PM
Great write, Joseph, congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve
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Date: 4/6/2021 9:57:00 PM
Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congrats on your win. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/6/2021 6:30:00 PM
"Orange sky paints the dawn" Such a beautiful image to behold. You have created a Masterpiece, Joseph. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:39:00 PM
Love your take on this..
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Date: 4/5/2021 2:37:00 PM
Hi Joseph, You have composed a well written “ O” plieade with stunning imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2021 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Joseph! It sounds like a lovely summer morning. Best wishes in Kim's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/5/2021 6:36:00 AM
Your pleiad is so smoothly written. Your scenes excellent. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/5/2021 5:07:00 AM
A striking Pleiades, rich in imagery, Joseph. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/4/2021 11:45:00 PM
Lovely Pleiades, Joseph:)
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Date: 4/4/2021 12:50:00 PM
Reads like an ode to nature all around us, well composed Joseph and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 4/4/2021 11:02:00 AM
Your "O" s created beautiful images. Well done in such a short poem.
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Date: 4/4/2021 10:19:00 AM
Perfect, well written and beautiful :) It reminds me of the sunset I saw lastnight!
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