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For Dilly Dally's I May Or May Not Be Opposed Poetry Contest
In a house with all the lights burning; but nobody's home In the clear night; stars burning brightly; but no lines drawn or shown Constellations; the only connection; that's never physically known But that's where salvation lies; Hidden behind those dead eyes; In the infinite unions; found; in those raven skies Defining purpose in fields of darkness; location mind-blown Bleakly smothered, a foligenous blurring; bestown Black holes; darkly mystical, in their misdirections unknown Calling out in plain sight; from the worlds last phone booth Lost in my damnation; is astounding material truth Staring at finite delusions; as I'm becoming long in the tooth

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Date: 1/8/2024 11:53:00 AM
Very powerful words made me feel plunged into the world of the poem - well deserved placement
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 1/8/2024 12:09:00 PM
Thanks D.D., I appreciate you sponsoring the contest it was fun to write for it! Warmest regards A.S.
Date: 1/6/2024 10:00:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful, A.S. A pleasure to stop by!
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Date: 1/7/2024 6:25:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, I have to admit I actually enjoyed the challenge of writing this one. A.S.
Date: 1/3/2024 8:28:00 PM
I like the surprise of 'the world's last phone booth'
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:14:00 AM
Hard to find a better metaphorical Glass House don't you think? I appreciate the compliment greatly! A.S.

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