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white in the sky, a dove, angelic sight a flight through every moment of daylight light drizzle of rain brought it to alight safe in the site of limbs, descending right into the calm night ; spread its wings delight flew right to the top again at sunlight 4/26/2017

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Date: 5/14/2017 6:08:00 AM
Good Morning Eve. The title caught my eye as I love the concept of soaring and being free. Your words and entry did not disappoint. You have captured the essence of all of that beautifully and the format also. Well done entirely.
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:02:00 AM
A lovely monorhyme, Eve. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/30/2017 6:59:00 PM
Nice one Eve seems like many liked the same words to rhyme with light, enjoyed this anyway congrats on your placement!
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Date: 4/30/2017 5:11:00 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/30/2017 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 4/28/2017 4:26:00 PM
This is a lovely piece, Eve - I can just picture the scene so vividly! Well done. Regards, John.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/29/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, John ~*
Date: 4/27/2017 2:01:00 AM
A wonderful job, Eve! Best of luck to you!
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Date: 4/29/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, White Wolf, for the good luck ~*
Date: 4/26/2017 6:12:00 PM
I enjoyed this very much. Fabulously done :)
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Date: 4/29/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina ~*
Date: 4/26/2017 6:10:00 PM
Very pretty. I really liked this, Eve. HOpe you are having a great day!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/29/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, ~*
Date: 4/26/2017 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful Eve. I liked everything about this. This poem should do well in the contest. Best wishes my friend.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/29/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, for the support ~*

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