Eve Roper Poet Monorhyme

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Opens Its Wings and Soars

white in the sky, a dove, angelic sight

a flight through every moment of daylight

light drizzle of rain brought it to alight

safe in the site of limbs, descending right 

into the calm night ; spread its wings delight

flew right to the top again at sunlight





4/26/2017

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Lisa Ricci May 14, 2017 at 6:08 AM Good Morning Eve. The title caught my eye as I love the concept of soaring and being free. Your words and entry did not disappoint. You have captured the essence of all of that beautifully and the format also. Well done entirely.

Sandra Haight May 2, 2017 at 9:02 AM A lovely monorhyme, Eve. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton April 30, 2017 at 6:59 PM Nice one Eve seems like many liked the same words to rhyme with light, enjoyed this anyway congrats on your placement!

Alexis Y. April 30, 2017 at 5:11 PM Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Joseph May April 30, 2017 at 4:37 PM Congrats on your win Eve

John Michaels April 28, 2017 at 4:26 PM This is a lovely piece, Eve - I can just picture the scene so vividly! Well done. Regards, John. Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 6:37 PM Thank you, John ~*

White Wolf April 27, 2017 at 2:01 AM A wonderful job, Eve! Best of luck to you! Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 6:38 PM Thank you, White Wolf, for the good luck ~*

Akkina Downing April 26, 2017 at 6:12 PM I enjoyed this very much. Fabulously done :) Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 6:38 PM Thank you, Akkina ~*

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2017 at 6:10 PM Very pretty. I really liked this, Eve. HOpe you are having a great day! Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 6:39 PM Thank you, Andrea, ~*

Chris Green April 26, 2017 at 5:22 PM Beautiful Eve. I liked everything about this. This poem should do well in the contest. Best wishes my friend. Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 6:39 PM Thank you, Chris, for the support ~*