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OPENING DAY

The anxious crowd Gathers Slowly anticipating The grand opening A bud trembles Dew drops shiver A late sun Unlocks the stage door A gentle hum builds Slowly petal fingers open To unheard applause A chatter of sparrows A distant hoot The muffled cooing Of doves Crimson capes Opening to nature’s suitors

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Date: 5/16/2024 10:03:00 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Opening Day" write again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
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Date: 5/16/2024 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for listing your nice poem in my sponsored contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/11/2024 10:03:00 AM
Your "Opening Day" is a wonderful write. Spring/Summer is a great time of the year... Have A Blessed Day/Weekend Writing Away.........
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Date: 5/10/2024 9:33:00 PM
An enjoyable poem of nature. I liked the comparison to a theater event. The title is catchy.
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