OPEN VERSE 5-6

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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CHANGE obvious abrupt hiatus distinctive light & shadow contrastive focussed in visible autonomy blurred impressions with striking effect evolving in slight elevation subtly subverted in fleeting glimpses dictated by chance OPACITY phenomena in distinct contours of ornamental simplicity consolidated in controversial conception & recollection of repeated quality so consummate & finely drawn contrast uniquely positioned in a genesis of memorable & blissful feelings accentuated by curving contours announced &enhanced confirmed with emphasis & enthusiasm

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