OPEN VERSE 1-2

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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SEPARARTENESS transition & confrontation natural yet different spheres gradual moments of instability in realistic detail nuanced graduations apparent &highlighted in a sense of retrospective unconsciously anticipated COINCIDENCE melancholy irony unmistakable in transition of systematic study both intuitive &significant fleeting glimpses introduce movement registered &dictated by chance in a slightest & naive feature of conspicuous pleasure highlighted in continuity of personality

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