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Open Heart

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Nayda's Chimera World contest.  Using words mosaic, maze, moon, guardian, garden, angel, heaven, heart, midnight, clouds.

Dedicated to my daughter's boyfriend. His dad passed away today after suffering through open heart surgery a couple weeks ago. 

 

 

OPEN HEART midnight clOuds unseen by angels my sOul’s suffering ~ O guardian mOOn keep vigil O’er me as i tOss and turn ~ a heart shivering Open tO heaven lOcked in living hell ~ mOsaic garden a maze burgeOning with dreadful dreams ~ weeds plucked by gOd in due season as lids release sand ~ springs up new life a butterscOtch beach water laps at my feet 2/12/2017

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Erina Rain
Date: 3/3/2017 7:18:00 AM
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This is beautiful. I love the word choice, the transitioning...beautiful...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2017 7:20:00 AM
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Thanks so much!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2017 8:09:00 AM
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A 7 for the lovely poem that takes us gently from sorrow to healing! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2017 9:41:00 AM
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Thank you, Janice!

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