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Open Arms

My heart accepts your apology, And welcomes you home again. The love I share is warmer than the sun, And I too, forgive you of your sins. These open arms receive you, I’m ready for the making up to embark. Clutching you to my chest, I wont’ ever let go, For these arms are the extensions of my heart. Wrapping you up the whole night through, As I whisper in your ear how much I love you. _________________________ For Brian's "My Dear" Contest

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Date: 11/25/2009 9:48:00 PM
I enjoy reading yet again and it seems I have missed much....thank you The Southern Belle
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Date: 11/25/2009 3:04:00 PM
Endearing and romantic Raul, all the very best in Brian's contest >> James
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:17:00 AM
And written from the heart. Simply beautiful! Bestwishes in Brian's contest. Also, Raul, thank you so much for sponsoring these contests that challenge and inspire me. I am so .....honored you have chosen my Haiku for first place. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:49:00 PM
Dear my, Raul. She is a lucky girl to be loved and forgiven by you. Good luck in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:04:00 PM
Soup Mail again...
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:52:00 PM
wonderfully penned!
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:16:00 AM
These verses are full of reconcilation,forgivness,full of soft whispers,one would read and enjoy rereading..this poem whispers love,mending and happiness....lovely poem.. a fav--Charma
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:57:00 AM
What a lovely romantic poem from your pen .. u are a sensitive soul, Raul, and yor contest has drawn much attention from the Soupers.. lovely photo to write a poem .. sorry I got an error message when I tried to open the Soup Mail u sent me.. could u send it again please?.. thankxx for your comments on my poetry also..luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/23/2009 2:39:00 AM
i read your poem nov 2009'
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:34:00 PM
Thank you for your support for my contest Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:22:00 PM
Wonderful submission for the contest, Raul! You describe a place we all long to be when there is tension in a relationship. This works if we look at it from the perspective of our Heavenly Father as well. Hugs! Donna
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Date: 11/22/2009 7:18:00 PM
warm, loving poem! Raul, and thanks for your kind comments, jimmy
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Date: 11/22/2009 7:10:00 PM
Nice poem Raul... especially like last three lines. -Robert
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