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Opaque Shadows

Two opaque shadows Are cast in Moonglow. Dancing heart-to-heart Baring their souls Enter the fever's heat As molten lava flows. Desire is replete. Simpatico. Thanks to, LG and GW. For the inspiration, To write this poem.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 4/30/2024 4:54:00 PM

Great poem. I enjoyed this :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/11/2024 1:06:00 PM

A beautifully done creative write, “As molten lave flows”~ piwerful imagery, A winner Thank you! Pangie

R J. Elless
Date: 3/12/2024 7:30:00 AM

Pangie, thank you, that is such a nice thing to say. I appreciate your honesty. Sometimes the words are not easy to choose. Carry on with style, as I know you will. XX

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/11/2024 3:06:00 PM

Back, RJ! I love simplicity plus an excellent write. This is like a delicious slice of love and sensuality. Hence a …..Fav! Pangie xxx

R J. Elless
Date: 3/11/2024 1:34:00 PM

Thank You, Pangie. They are so hot. This started as six lines. Saying it over and over, in my head. This is how it came out. I wondered if I should say that. Thank YouXX

R J. Elless

Date: 3/11/2024 9:42:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda. This started out as something different. Sometimes I just follow it. Strange but true. Keep Rolling.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/9/2024 8:56:00 AM

It is indeed an inspirational poem. The opaque shadows was a great introduction to this tale.