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I spot you writhing in your shell undersized however you possess an ocean tally and release a tide bestow your tenderness to distinctive forsake, further vacuous chest until slender bird abandons nidus his feathers come to craft a verse of reliance what a precious devotion It's a ballad that... I always create for you. Written: September 30, 2022

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Date: 10/1/2022 7:46:00 AM
Vivid, moving imagery, Lasaad. Janice
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Date: 10/1/2022 5:52:00 AM
A panoramic artistic creation, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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Date: 10/1/2022 5:44:00 AM
Wonderfully artistic my friend: what a precious devotion-- It's a ballad that... I always create for you.
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Date: 10/1/2022 4:15:00 AM
You are amazing Lasaad.....! Poems ooze out from you, creating whirlpools of thought. Wonderful penning !
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Date: 10/1/2022 2:53:00 AM
- A profoundly sensitive poem, Las ... lovely written - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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