Oo---I'M Afraid of My Fridge

I lean into the fridge to get a bite to eat.
And as my nose attests to,it doesn't smell too sweet!

I'm trying to decipher what that is in that dish.
And much to my dismay,it's month-old tuna fish!

There's odd assorted bowls of only God knows what.
They've been pushed to the back and hidden there by glut.

I'm so mad at myself for letting it go this far.
I even found I'm cleaning out an empty pickle jar!

Potatoes growing fur and other nasty things.
Moldy bread,soured milk,and dried up chicken wings.

The nose knows that I should learn to fix just what I need.
Cos' leftovers land in the ozone,of this I must take heed!



for contest"Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution"
sponsored by Susan Burch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 5:50 PM
I've met refrigerators like this in my own kitchen. Very funny and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Deb. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 2:42 AM
Congratulations deb on yout win.Enjoyed your poem.
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 10:00 PM
ewww, i can realte to this.. great wrpdings and congrats on the fine win, dear deb!..:) huggs
Williams Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Brilliant entry for the contest, a great story told. good luck :)
Peranteau Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 1:20 PM
The flow of this write is in character with the form you chose Deb; and I just loved reading it dear poet ! Great entry by the way ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
Eastman Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 8:57 AM
LOL. Sounds like my fride used to be... Now a days we have to use the left overs. Sigh. Fun poem.
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 8:48 PM
Deb, I think Susan will like this very much. You did an awesome job with it. Great topic, your fridge!!!
M Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 8:28 PM
I'm only new at writing poems, and my age is, well ... i'm not telling, but i haven't got up to year 10 yet so yeah, but i thought that a limerick is - a. a. b. b. a. Anyway i don't want to make you feel bad or anything so can you explain it to me please? Tay, Signing off!
M Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 8:32 PM
And i just realized that this is a couplet! SOZZZZZZZZZZZZZ :(:(:(!! :'(!!!!! Any way this poem rules!!!
M Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Oh and i wish you the best for the contest!!!!
A   Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Lol... Thanks for the smile... good luck in the contest... P.d
Pettit Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Imagine how the refrigerator would smell after a long power outage. You have written this very descriptively well with impressive rhyming.
Stanley Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Deb, very nicely done, as it's something we have all experienced at some point. Perhaps it’s time to eat out. Good luck in the contest.
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