Ooh That Hurt
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I’m feeling great, I’m fine and dandy
So I treat myself to a sticky candy
I pop it in my mouth, start to suck
all of a sudden my filling comes unstuck!
It’s then I learn the sorry truth -
there’s a gaping hole in my tooth
I ring the dental reception nurse
their schedule’s full, oh what a curse!
They can fit me in Tuesday at two thirty -
a very apt time as my tooth’s hurty!
With mouth wide open I lie in the chair
treatment starts, I wish I wasn’t there!
My dentist gets busy with the buzzing drill
when it’s finally over, I must pay their bill
Any more thoughts of candy I must avert
the filling was painless; it’s the bill that hurt!
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8/17/18
Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2018
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