Onward To My Celestial Abode

Celestial radiance… ...brightened by God’s eternal love Cheers me up in my earthly sojourn… …as a pilgrim vanquishing sin-inflicted throes Beheld by divine witnesses far above the firmament... …in circumspectly treading service-paths! With faith’s pinion… …I march toward my heavenly* abode Subduing tendency to be lissome in my spirit…… …For my soul’s triumphant repose While trusting my sovereign Guide… …midst reproaches that besmirch my testimony!
*Hebrews 11:16 But now they desire a better country, that is, an heavenly: wherefore God is not ashamed to be called their God: for he hath prepared for them a city. May 27, 2018 4th place, "Eight Word Challenge" Poetry Contest (celestial, besmirch, pinion, throes, sojourn, lissome, firmament, repose) Sponsored by John Hamilton; judged on 6/4/2018.
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Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Well done, Beata. Congrats on your win.
Gentry Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 12:29 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful inspirational poem.
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Great use of the 8 words , Beata , with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations for your win Beata :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Very nice write Beata, congrats on a fine placement!
Leiser Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:43 PM
This is excellent verse, Beata! And a great testimony to your faith! Great use of the required words for the contest. Hope it places well :)
Agustin Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Praise God. Thanks for your comment.
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