Only Two Weeks, the Promise

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It was only suppose to be for two weeks, that was the promise,
      and she was suppose to be very quiet and have a small appetite;
well that turned out to be a lie- she eats like a bear after hibernation,
            she is so loud at night, I have to shout out-  QUIET!

Soon, two weeks became two months, and now we are two years,
      she does have some flaws but she looks at me with big green eyes;
and my heart warms, and when she kisses my cheek with sweet love,
             I forget she is long overdue and an unwanted- GUEST!

But then, I feel sad for the house intruder because she is homeless,
      unwanted, cast out, with no place to go, and so she stays;
I come home to find the house upset, the living room a total mess,
          cushions on the floor, things scattered and her- ASLEEP!

Oh dear, what to do with her, should I find her a new place to live,
      should I insist my sister who sent her, take her back;
the truth is I would miss this house invader so much I would weep,
            so I whispered in her ear, this is your forever home;
                  and I christened her, Snuggles-  Le CHAT!

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February 25, 2017

Poetry/Verse/Only Two Weeks, The Promise
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 880-087-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspired by the contest, An Unwanted Guest
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

Sixth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/6/2017 1:26:00 AM
Aww, this is so lovely! So not unwanted anymore, it warms my heart. Congratulations :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 12:06:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2017 11:23:00 PM
Cheers to both 'S' cats there, Constance. : ) I've seem the "temporary" phenomenon often stretch out, at times per the original plan of somebody....
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Date: 3/2/2017 7:14:00 PM
Doug the temporary cat will never leave me ever, she is MINE!
Date: 2/25/2017 4:42:00 PM
Funny how those furry friends become forever friend! Nice, Constance'
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Date: 2/25/2017 5:56:00 PM
Kim, thanks for visiting, oh yes Snuggles is an absolute hoot and so is my old girl, Smudges (spoiled rotten)
Date: 2/25/2017 4:38:00 PM
A most delightful write! Thank you for the smiles ;) xomo
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Date: 2/25/2017 5:57:00 PM
Maureen, thanks for the delightful, and its a true story too !
Date: 2/25/2017 12:20:00 PM
...so adorable...it is incredible how quickly they reach our hearts. the sweet details give such a happy feeling to read, a wonderful story, lovingly expressed :-) many blessings to you and snuggles, lynn
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Date: 2/25/2017 5:58:00 PM
Lynn, thanks for reading my poem and for the nice comment !
Date: 2/25/2017 11:57:00 AM
I have to say it, too - Awwww! I loved reading this.
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:00:00 PM
Sunlite, thanks for reading, and its true at first Snuggles was unwanted, I did not really want her, now I cannot imagine my life without her!
Date: 2/25/2017 11:48:00 AM
So cute, she knows she is loved
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:00:00 PM
Tim, thanks for the cute... she is more than loved, I adore her and she knows it !
Date: 2/25/2017 10:58:00 AM
Aww I can't think of a more adorable house guest than your lovely cat and I loved the twist at the end of the tale - very clever Constance:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:03:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the adorable, oh I do adore my big ball of grey fur (the reason she was thrown out of her previous home) and she gets along well with my old Calico cat, Smudges, they are so funny together....
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