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Only Two Weeks, the Promise

It was only suppose to be for two weeks, that was the promise,
      and she was suppose to be very quiet and have a small appetite;
well that turned out to be a lie- she eats like a bear after hibernation,
            she is so loud at night, I have to shout out-  QUIET!

Soon, two weeks became two months, and now we are two years,
      she does have some flaws but she looks at me with big green eyes;
and my heart warms, and when she kisses my cheek with sweet love,
             I forget she is long overdue and an unwanted- GUEST!

But then, I feel sad for the house intruder because she is homeless,
      unwanted, cast out, with no place to go, and so she stays;
I come home to find the house upset, the living room a total mess,
          cushions on the floor, things scattered and her- ASLEEP!

Oh dear, what to do with her, should I find her a new place to live,
      should I insist my sister who sent her, take her back;
the truth is I would miss this house invader so much I would weep,
            so I whispered in her ear, this is your forever home;
                  and I christened her, Snuggles-  Le CHAT!

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February 25, 2017

Poetry/Verse/Only Two Weeks, The Promise
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 880-087-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspired by the contest, An Unwanted Guest
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 6, 2017 at 1:26 AM
Aww, this is so lovely! So not unwanted anymore, it warms my heart. Congratulations :)
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Vinson Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Cheers to both 'S' cats there, Constance. : ) I've seem the "temporary" phenomenon often stretch out, at times per the original plan of somebody....
La France Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Doug the temporary cat will never leave me ever, she is MINE!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Funny how those furry friends become forever friend! Nice, Constance'
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Kim, thanks for visiting, oh yes Snuggles is an absolute hoot and so is my old girl, Smudges (spoiled rotten)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 4:38 PM
A most delightful write! Thank you for the smiles ;) xomo
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Maureen, thanks for the delightful, and its a true story too !
Marie Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 12:20 PM
...so adorable...it is incredible how quickly they reach our hearts. the sweet details give such a happy feeling to read, a wonderful story, lovingly expressed :-) many blessings to you and snuggles, lynn
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Lynn, thanks for reading my poem and for the nice comment !
Wanter Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 11:57 AM
I have to say it, too - Awwww! I loved reading this.
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Sunlite, thanks for reading, and its true at first Snuggles was unwanted, I did not really want her, now I cannot imagine my life without her!
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 11:48 AM
So cute, she knows she is loved
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Tim, thanks for the cute... she is more than loved, I adore her and she knows it !
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Aww I can't think of a more adorable house guest than your lovely cat and I loved the twist at the end of the tale - very clever Constance:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Jan, thanks for the adorable, oh I do adore my big ball of grey fur (the reason she was thrown out of her previous home) and she gets along well with my old Calico cat, Smudges, they are so funny together....
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