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Only Twenty-Three

Believe or not I'm really only twenty-three Look old for my age, had a rough life you see But in spite of my trials Really have no rivals Stunning and admired, can't believe my esprit

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/2/2018 12:20:00 PM

Happy jack is only twenty three/he fooled you all, including me/he eats hot chillies' /chases young fillies/ he's a poetry soup celebrity/

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 1:27:00 PM

Had you all fooled eh!!!!! Your Poetry Soup celeb wishing you a great day!!!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/2/2018 8:18:00 AM

I love that; when I ask a child their age and they say "8," I always say "I'm 8 too!" this confuses them until they get to know me.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 8:24:00 AM

I NEVER growed up... still a little guy at heart!!! Why grow up anyway... no fun in that!!! XOX

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/2/2018 7:50:00 AM

Giggles, forever young! <3

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 8:01:00 AM

The body's old but the mind's still infantile!!! Huzzah!!! XOX

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/2/2018 5:20:00 AM

I believe you...Have a nice day Jack...

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 5:32:00 AM

WOW!!! Early we are or what!!!! You have a great one too... sunshine and temps close to 80! YEE HAW... finally!