Only the Seer Says

The day is beckoning and it's dawn shall awake For I to arise to knowing where my head will lie Is it my fortune to eventually feel I to forsake Will I be dispositioned to feel I to despise To acknowledge the one that will I succumb Shall it be Dark or Light, allow the clouds be If such confusions become temperamental Look into my eyes, such hunger you will see When seen I draw nor Light, nor drawn Dark Leaving my open eyes to declare whether Allowing such hunger in eventual see Only the seer influences, such can sever .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/1/2015 2:53:00 PM
The seer discerns the light, once past the dark and the light is very revealing. I like this one.
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James Fraser
Date: 5/2/2015 1:26:00 PM
Indeed it is MLK. Nothing better walking from the Dark into the Light, James :)
Date: 4/26/2015 9:50:00 PM
Huge one, a verse that plunges deep and swimming into conflicts but then I believe the seer will see the light.. anyhow.. ((hugs))~olive eloisa :)!
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James Fraser
Date: 5/1/2015 3:58:00 PM
The ancient Seer sees seas, well beyond the seas the Seer sees. The Highlander Seer sees the seas that traveled did he, to see what the Highlander Seer wanted to see. Upon seeing where the Seer seen, the scene, he'd seen, had been seen, so serene was this scene the Highlander Seer over the seas scene in his dreams ;-) seen scene hugs aplenty, your Seer's seen his dream//Dino James xxxx
Date: 4/26/2015 7:40:00 PM
Stunning... LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 5/1/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thank you kindly PD, wishing you a blessed weekend L:) L:)
Date: 4/26/2015 5:08:00 PM
ohh, a deep perception of two sides of life and feelings; the seer knows best... greeat one, prince.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 5/1/2015 3:10:00 PM
Into the Dark I enter, on reaching it's center, allows me to decide to return Princess. Blessed weekend to you, and I trust your resting your Labour Day, hugs//James :) :)
Date: 4/26/2015 8:17:00 AM
Well dear poet, you are delving into write which only ink and slip can hint your hide without the complete, of your desire. Gentle sir, I pray that the seer is the sort with gift of sage. Interesting write James, and I will be snooping into your writes searching for esoteric epistles which may expound further this write. Have a blessed Sunday my friend.....much love, james
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Date: 5/1/2015 2:12:00 PM
Every so often nowadays I like to delve into the dark, for I always return to the light. It's a journey that all should take for it reveals where they belong. Love your comments my Bard, my good friend. A blessed weekend to you and Noah James, hugs for you both, James.....
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