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I’m sleeping in
just call me out
it’s the simplest kind of comfort
I do it for me
there’s a softness and care
my, that got so wholesome

I know, I should embrace hardship
adversity builds resilience
it’s darkness that reveals the stars
that last one sounds too good to be original
but I’m not researching it
haven’t you been reading?

I’m sleeping in fugaciously
and metaphorically.
If you’re in the water
it’s good to swim
otherwise
you could be writing.
.
.
Songs for this:
Sleeping In by The Radio Dept.
Save the Phenomenon by Fievel Is Glauque

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Date: 10/23/2024 5:46:00 PM
"That's a Fu•gá•zi. Give it to your girlfriend". ~ That's what Johnny Depp, the diamond dealer, says the Al Pacino, the mafiosi, about the diamond ring he's showing him in the movie- "Donnie Brasco".
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Date: 10/23/2024 6:20:00 PM
I've never seen "Donnie Brasco" - is it a classic?
Date: 10/22/2024 12:35:00 PM
Few gay shush lee, I’ve come across this word only a few times in crossword puzzles, I’m not sure if hardship builds resilience Anais, too much can also break a person’s spirit, but hey! sleeping in fugaciously, by the sound of it you know such moments are fleeting, and must be fully indulged, you even gave the cast a day off, (slave driver) lol! cheers David
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Date: 10/23/2024 10:54:00 AM
A new word now and then. You can't use them in real life though - we have to try and fit in. I avoid hardship whenever I can, but it still happens. The cast is still running around, like squirrels. You'd almost think they had their own lives! Thanks for the comment, Mr Kavanagh =]
Date: 10/21/2024 8:39:00 AM
My glee at reading your little sleeping in story is fugacious, at best. That having been said, I learned a new word today, thanks to you. It will become my new buzzword, at least till tomorrow ;)
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Date: 10/21/2024 2:05:00 PM
The Merriam Webster online dictionary has a "Word of the day" - "fugacious" was one of those. I'm learning =]
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