Only Ray

As the sunrises casting shadows Magenta against gray In only a few minutes there's change The color just doesn't stay Then a bright apricot sunrise Changes the clouds from gray Now a lavender tone chills spring As young green leaves display Change continues as the roosters crow, will clouds win today? Only time will tell the outcome Morn's sun might be only ray

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/4/2014 8:07:00 PM

To continue about John he is a great man never complaining, so that's where the inspiration came from for my fathers son. just wanted to let you. cheri

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/4/2014 8:05:00 PM

I love your how you discribed the sunrise it's a beautiful nature poem. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem about my father and a son, he is by the way a man i work with named John he is handicappible but he basically takes care of his whole family his dad died when he was very young John stepped in and took over his dad's shoes, his sister and brother are both physically handicappible also. His mother takes care of the house and the other two and john works. this has been going on for over 25 years,

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/4/2014 7:34:00 PM

This is a really lovely write, Sara. I enjoy watching the sun rise and set, and the clouds as they change colors. You captured it wonderfully in your poem!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/4/2014 4:57:00 PM

There was this type of sky here yesterday all pink & orange and lavender so beautiful, hope you're having a good day! Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/3/2014 10:54:00 PM

Yes, seeing the sunrise is a majestic experience, I love to look at the sunrise and be awe in its magnificence! I also love the sunset too, they are different, they each have a different feel, just like Spring is different from Autumn! The might have similar temperatures, but nature is quite different! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a powerful piece describing the colors of the sunrise! Great Work!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2014 2:47:00 PM

Dear Sara, how beautifully you describe the sky's ever-changing colors. I hope the sun does win out today in Georgia! Loved the vivid imagery, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2014 4:20:00 PM

Yes, the sun won out and it turned out to be a beautiful day even though hot enough to turn on the AC..Sara

Dom- X-

Date: 4/3/2014 2:15:00 PM

Brilliant poem. wonderful imagery in every line. DX

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2014 1:58:00 PM

- Beautiful when the spring blooming - Enjoy spring .... a lovely time! - A pleasure to read your poem Sara - thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/3/2014 1:08:00 PM

I Think Being In Tune As Touch With Nature Is A Wonderful Place To Venture...Tis A Pretty Much Innocent Endeavor And We Do Believe That Of Essence Love Does Pave Her Way....Your Rustic In Part Art Is Always A Pleasure As Lovely, Beautiful Sara...Love, Jeremy