Only Part-Time

only part-time darting in and out of shadows her thoughts languish unbidden turning suicidal

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/15/2021 2:06:00 PM

Sometimes you follow shadows when they crowd out the sun - very poignant, a Fave for me~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2021 2:59:00 PM

Wow. Thanks for the Fave, Michelle. Much appreciated. Hope all is well. Happy Tuesday, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/15/2021 8:49:00 AM

Many are in a dark place, sadly there are never any tell tale signs. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/15/2021 8:21:00 AM

Heartbreaking

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/14/2021 9:38:00 PM

So sad and potentially heartbreaking, Gershon. Common malady these days.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2021 3:06:00 PM

I hope that the end, that suicide, never becomes a common malady though. Thanks, Milt.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 6/14/2021 7:27:00 PM

A very precarious situation and very real in people's lives today. Shalom Gershon!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2021 3:02:00 PM

Unfortunately true, Anselmo. Too many suicides these days. May that end now!! Peace, Gershon