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She said that the music flowed through her soul Life was music, though hers life was a disaster It was about unrequited love even before she was born Uncompromising and impossible Her performance always carried hope An artist's muse - which was crushed into small pieces She had only one wish a cloudless sky and a problem free day But the moment never came 22.03.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved A-Muse-Sing Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux 4th place in the contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2022 7:10:00 AM

Beautiful verse, my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2022 7:36:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/13/2020 9:42:00 AM

hI Anne- Lise: A beautiful poem of lost love Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2020 1:42:00 PM

- Ralph, many thanks for your friendly visit, congrats and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neethu Sivaraj Adiyoli

Date: 4/13/2020 12:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win... It is a really deserving poem...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2020 1:41:00 PM

- Many thanks Neethu, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/26/2020 6:35:00 PM

this one is beautiful yet so sad, the ending touches the heart... wonderful penning my friend... stay safe! hugs and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2020 1:41:00 PM

- Many thanks Sandra, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/25/2020 10:00:00 AM

A wonderful, touching yet sad poem - it is an absolute gem my dear friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/25/2020 8:23:00 AM

A lovely piece Anne-Lise, though sad but very touching indeed. Hope all well, keep healthy, Blessings, Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:42:00 AM

- Many thanks Gordon, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/23/2020 11:57:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I love the content of this beautiful, sad write. You use the free verse form so well with this wonderful write. Always writing with a golden pen, Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:42:00 AM

- Mike, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/23/2020 11:37:00 AM

One of the best Poems, I ever read...a FAv. Panagiota xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:41:00 AM

- Many thanks Panagiota, for your friendly visit, the fave and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/23/2020 10:02:00 AM

Poignant but beautiful writing regardless of the last line dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/22/2020 7:15:00 PM

Strong imagery. I do love it. So real. Great poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:40:00 AM

- Mark, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2020 6:20:00 PM

such a touching piece my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:39:00 AM

- Many thanks Jan, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/22/2020 6:19:00 PM

Sounds like music is her hope!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:39:00 AM

- Many thanks Kim, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/22/2020 4:18:00 PM

Never came for us to see...Enjoyed it

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:39:00 AM

- Many thanks Arturo, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/22/2020 3:56:00 PM

Great sad write Anne-Lise, well done...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:38:00 AM

- Charlie, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2020 3:28:00 PM

Sad ending but a beautiful poem, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:38:00 AM

- Many thanks Vijay, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 3/22/2020 3:16:00 PM

Oh such a sad ending.... How sad such a simple dream could not come true...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:37:00 AM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/22/2020 3:04:00 PM

Sadly Anne, we have dreams but don't always get what we wish for. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2020 9:37:00 AM

- Many thanks Tom, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)