of you sometimes -
your strong arms around me -
and a white cloud envelops me
the cloud is grey,
for life rains down on me.
You are not here; I have only. . .
Traditional style cinquain: syllable count: 2/4/6/8/2
an oldie for the Cinquain Contest of Dr.Ram Mehta; not a win (theme: Longing)
Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2014
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