Premiere Contest WinnerOnly In a Different Life

Looking through the window of a shop,
I see you with a woman.
She lifts long auburn hair
while you, who stand behind her,
are fastening a strand of pearls
around her slender neck.
I close my eyes envisioning. . .

I've opened them to you 
facing me,
and I'm the woman
with the red-brown locks!
You touch my cheek, and in your eyes
I read an urgent need.
You lead me to the door,
around the corner to an empty alley.
Our bodies press together.
In the chill of night,
I taste warm, wild kisses on my mouth.
"Darling, my darling," escapes my lips,
then suddenly my reverie is broken. . . . 

A passerby has stopped
to place a dollar in my cup.
Murmuring my thanks,
I gaze once more into the store 
where diamond rings and necklaces glitter
like new snow beneath a winter moon.
The man whom I could know
only in a different life,
who stands inside the store
where I could never go,
takes his sweetheart's hand
and leads her past me
pretending not to see
a common homeless woman
who yearns for so much more
than mere necessities.


For the Seeker's Being Homeless Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Godwin Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 11:24 PM
WOW, like I said on the phone, I've missed some of your best having never gone backwards in time to read. Wow and Wow again. Love, CayCay
Carber Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 11:15 AM
You write as a poet but have the eye of a novelist....
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:20 PM
thanks. Sadly, I do not have that "extra" thing that makes for the current type of free verse that is so popular.
May Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 9:56 PM
Correct me if I am wrong but this is your 4th poem on soup and a winner! Amazing talent you have!!
Horn Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 7:36 AM
My imagination I did start to stretch; If kind friend one day I could fetch; Sat for spell; Sad could tell; Wrote poems while she was a wretch.
Borke Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 7:48 AM
You're a sensitive person, being able to feel what homeless feels like.
Troutman Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Beautifully written congratulations!
Flower Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:19 AM
A well-deserved win, Andrea. Congrats!
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Very well done Andre, we've probably all had these thoughts in our own way. Congratulations...
Haight Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Andrea, congratulations on a well-deserved First Place Trophy win for your amazing insight into the emotional pain of the homeless we seldom think about. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. What a moving poem. I love the last two lines; this is something we often forget when thinking about the homeless - it is about so much more than food and shelter. Agnes
Raina Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your top win! I could imagine the whole picture...well narrated.
Chung Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:18 AM
You could shoot an oscar worthy movie with just a pen and a piece of paper.
Y. Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Hi Andrea, I enjoyed your approach, it was so realistic and so sad. Congratulations on your top win it was well deserved: -)Alexis
Nusker Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Beautiful narration and amazing story, Andrea. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 1:57 AM
Exceptional write Andrea I love the story you told oh so heartbreak lyrics sad:-( congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Duet Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 12:41 AM
I know the feeling...congratulations, Andrea. Great poem. Carole
Daniel Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 12:21 AM
Oh, this one is beautiful, Andrea:) congratulations on your well deserved win:)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 11:25 PM
I really like your approach t the contest. Congrats on your top win.
White Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 10:59 PM
This is so wonderful, full of longing. Congratulations!
Onclaud Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 9:49 PM
how painful is this scene, andie... big congrats on your top award!..huggs
May Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 7:47 PM
Congrats on your top win Andrea
Richards Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Beautifully written, Andrea! Congrats to you!
Teagan Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Congratulations Andrea, enjoyed this one. Well done :)
P  Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Amazing Andrea, BIG CONGRATS!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:40 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea! Great story teller u r dear!
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