Only I, Have the Key

I open and close my stiff cold hands, and look down at what my pen has spilled; my hands ache from decades of writing, my many pages are totally filled. Electric jolts stab at my fingers, and my writing is dead and tingling; I put on my ugly, clumsy splints, and send my words to go a mingling. And mingling, mingling far and far, soon, I hear the snakes come creeping; to tear apart- destroy my words, the cobra asp came while I was sleeping. Then, came the unblinking viper asp, all the night my poetry they devoured; each word that my pen had let fall, and in the morning they left- a coward. Perhaps the asp thinks this is power, that they are cunning and will break me; that I will fall in beautiful broken pieces, but I have courage and only I, have the key. _______________________ April 29, 2018 Poetry/Quatrain/Only I, Have The Key Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1018-003-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Asp sponsor, Anthony Slausen Fourth Place

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Date: 5/8/2018 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this interesting poem. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/8/2018 8:35:00 AM
I like your 'outside the box' take on the theme, Constance! Congrats on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2018 1:00:00 AM
Congratulations,Constance on your win. Fabulous write.
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:27:00 PM
Fabulous write, Broken Wings, I love your take on the theme , congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:07:00 PM
Beautiful, BW. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:03:00 PM
Great take on the subject of the asp, Constance! Very creative, too. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 7:47:00 PM
Emotional and haunting write! Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 5/5/2018 7:09:00 PM
Nice job -JT
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