Onion

In infancy was formed a rounded root
Sleeping long in stratiform of clay
At harvest time pulled from its rest did shoot
A sphere of gold born forth on autumn’s day

So perfect that we thought it’d always go
Forth unchanged its coats all wrapped and whole
But worth occurs though painful as we know
By peeling layers slowly for the goal

Of giving up with tears as unrolled cast
With creamy warmth a supplement of flavor
Though smaller as successive mantels passed
Enhanced the dish with sacrificial savor

Recalling this our bites of it are sweet
A humble dish of onion may we eat!

11.9.18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/9/2018 4:42:00 PM
A very wise poem dear Mark, well penned and a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it, and thank you for your kind visit on my page.
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Mark Elam
Date: 11/10/2018 4:58:00 AM
Thank you! I am enjoying your poetry and so many others on this site.
Date: 11/9/2018 4:36:00 PM
An excellent Sonnet.
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Mark Elam
Date: 11/10/2018 5:00:00 AM
Thanks Maurice!
Date: 11/9/2018 1:32:00 PM
onions...right on...for years onion sandwiches were my favored delicacy...and once in while still
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Mark Elam
Date: 11/10/2018 4:59:00 AM
Their sacrifice enhances their flavor! Thanks.
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