Hija De La Luna Poet Limerick

One-Way Ticket

Homeward bound, I had a one-way ticket,
Pleased; it was stashed safely in my pocket.
          Showed it at the counter,
          “Wrong route”, said the teller.
I should be at home to fly this ticket!

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Poet Destroyer A August 18, 2014 at 8:05 PM anytime

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 12:52 PM Hija, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA Hija De La Luna August 1, 2014 at 6:12 AM Thanks, Linda :)

Casarah Nance July 27, 2014 at 10:13 AM Grats on your win :) :) Hija De La Luna July 27, 2014 at 10:30 AM Thank you, Casarah! :)

Roy Jerden July 27, 2014 at 9:08 AM Oops! Well done! Congratulations on your placement! Hija De La Luna July 27, 2014 at 10:28 AM Thank you, Roy! Congrats on your top win! :))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2014 at 8:37 AM Very witty write hija ! Congrats on fine win! Hija De La Luna July 27, 2014 at 10:30 AM Thanks for the nice words, Dr. Upma :)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2014 at 1:02 AM Amusing and funny piece, luna. congrats Hija De La Luna July 27, 2014 at 10:31 AM Am glad you find it funny-amusing, Dr. Ram!. Congratulations, too! :)

Joyce Johnson July 26, 2014 at 4:32 PM Congratulations on this win. Love, Joyce Hija De La Luna July 26, 2014 at 11:56 PM Thanks a lot, Joyce! Nice of you to drop by, too! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2014 at 1:57 PM How cute. Congrats on your win! Hija De La Luna July 26, 2014 at 11:56 PM Thanks, Andrea! Your congratulations means a lot :)

Sara Kendrick July 26, 2014 at 1:42 PM Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara Hija De La Luna July 26, 2014 at 11:57 PM Thank you, Sara!!! :))

Carolyn Devonshire July 26, 2014 at 11:53 AM Loved the irony in this poem! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn Hija De La Luna July 26, 2014 at 11:59 PM Thanks a lot for sponsoring this contest and appreciating my piece, Carolyn. I hope you had a grand vacation! :)

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 4:53 PM Hija, :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~ Hija De La Luna July 26, 2014 at 11:59 PM Nice to know you are back, Linda. Thanks for dropping by :))

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2014 at 1:00 AM Hija, Ha I love what you did here. Far away rhymes work for me all the time. Counter & Teller, enjoyed the limerick... Linda Hija De La Luna July 14, 2014 at 2:51 AM Thanks for enjoying the limerick and the nice comment, Linda :))

Roy Jerden July 13, 2014 at 5:48 PM Good beginning... Some work on the rhyme needed, I think. Cheers, Roy Hija De La Luna July 13, 2014 at 7:06 PM thanks for the nice words, roy :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2014 at 9:12 AM - Great one .... !!! :))) - Like it !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)