Oneness

VIDEO/AUDIO on YouTube above. NOTE: On the video; double-click to enlarge, and/or, right-click for the drop-down menu and click on 'Loop' for auto-repeat, click settings and pick the highest level for quality viewing. Oneness Once good conduct paves an Obstinate course, learning Often propels one's true Objectives, crushing all Obstacles and adverse Opinions. My thriving Outlook is infinite. 2021 April 02 *3rd Place* Pleiades O ~~Kim Merryman HMS/PS checked, 6 syllables per line

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2021 2:19:00 PM

Congrats on this educational work. It is true that if one puts right first everything else will fall in place. Way to go. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/11/2021 2:35:00 PM

Truth be told, it came 2nd in my youth living it up with friends, later, my family helped me reel it into first, tho' 'twas easy having lost the bait, --you're generous to a tee/T, Sara, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2021 3:04:00 PM

GREAT job here, William!!! Even recited too. Congrats.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/7/2021 8:19:00 PM

Thanks for the cheers, Andrea, and more, Aloha!

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/7/2021 2:03:00 PM

William, congrats on your win in my contest, with this creative pleaides! Blessings, Kim M

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/7/2021 2:43:00 PM

Again, thanks, Kim, much enjoyed, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2021 10:25:00 PM

Back with a big congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/6/2021 10:36:00 PM

Thanks, Eve, and my compliments to you too, Aloha!

Joseph May

Date: 4/3/2021 1:15:00 PM

Very nicely done William, best wishes

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/3/2021 7:23:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph, also for the uplift, Aloha!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/3/2021 8:44:00 AM

Nice one, William. Good choice of words and it certainly makes good sense. Good advice, too.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/3/2021 7:22:00 PM

Again, thank you for your generous words, Milton, enjoy your Eastertime my friend, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/3/2021 5:37:00 AM

Well done with "O" s, William --quite a meaningful poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/3/2021 7:21:00 PM

Thanks, aplenty, Vijay for your insightful sharing my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2021 10:19:00 PM

Great write, William, good luck in the contest. May you and your family have a wonderful Easter. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/3/2021 6:35:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, also for the uplift, busy earlier paying an unexpected visit to the 'tye-dye' years as my 7 yr-old grt-grndsn got too close to my nicely colored dzn eggs--just 24 dzn more to go, Aloha!