One Wolf's Shadow

The vivacious wolf runs wild with the moon Knowing the new day will be coming soon She dances fearlessly in the night's glow Growing an endless bond with her shadow As the moon begins to hide from the sun Her shadow slowly starts to fade away The end has come for this magical run For now, there is no more time left to play The hot sun has now risen in the sky Lying in dark shade she sleeps until night Dreaming of her shadow she starts to cry Sadly yearning for the returned moonlight So her shadow may emerge from the dark Creating a new journey to embark Now the sun sets as the day disappears Bringing a friend to dry away her tears
2/25/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/28/2018 8:36:00 PM
Hello Jeremy,oh this poem is so beautiful. You created this poem beautifully. I can see this scene a I read this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and great rhythm and rhymes grace your poem elegantly Jeremy. Congratulations on your excellent win with your impressive write! ~Susan
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Jeremy. :)
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Awesome imagery. A joy to read.
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:50:00 AM
GREAT ONE JEREMY! I loved every word. The rhythm and rhyme were spot on. And you used 10 syllables per line which I am always a huge fan of. Lovely poem, congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:49:00 PM
I read this one yesterday but forgot to leave a comment. I absolutely love this one!!! Great imagery. Well done.
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Date: 2/26/2018 9:34:00 AM
Very cool write, personifying the wolf, dancing fearlessly in the nights glow, very nice line. Glad you're back!
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