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One Wink, They Sync

Little one winks to her big James Her mind wants the evening games Ones desire to be astride For their lips to collide Passion fueled they danced into flames .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/7/2015 8:20:00 AM
Dino James, I can only let you know that I am wearing my wide smile now... :D! ((hugs))xxx//olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 2:42:00 PM
I love you wearing your wide smile, for it makes me smile little one. Warm hugs, your Dino James xxxx
Date: 4/6/2015 10:44:00 AM
That dance must have been the flamingo..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 4/6/2015 10:54:00 AM
Indeed Sara, or the Flamenco ;-) Happy Easter Monday to you and yours, James :) :)
Date: 4/6/2015 9:40:00 AM
wow a passionate limerick James - great one! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/6/2015 10:29:00 AM
Glad you liked my suggestion! hugs jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 4/6/2015 10:25:00 AM
Hiya Jan, Easter Monday's mind in wandering write. Thanks for the wee clue to that little change, now adopted, hugs//xx James xx//
Date: 4/6/2015 7:35:00 AM
Mmm, now this is my kind of limerick! ;)
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James Fraser
Date: 4/6/2015 7:40:00 AM
A little bit of Happy Easter Monday writing Casarah, glad you liked it, James :) :)