One Wink, They Sync

Little one winks to her big James Her mind wants the evening games Ones desire to be astride For their lips to collide Passion fueled they danced into flames .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Dino James, I can only let you know that I am wearing my wide smile now... :D! ((hugs))xxx//olive eloisa
Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 2:42 PM
I love you wearing your wide smile, for it makes me smile little one. Warm hugs, your Dino James xxxx
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:44 AM
That dance must have been the flamingo..Sara
Fraser Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:54 AM
Indeed Sara, or the Flamenco ;-) Happy Easter Monday to you and yours, James :) :)
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 9:40 AM
wow a passionate limerick James - great one! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Glad you liked my suggestion! hugs jan xx
Fraser Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Hiya Jan, Easter Monday's mind in wandering write. Thanks for the wee clue to that little change, now adopted, hugs//xx James xx//
Nance Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Mmm, now this is my kind of limerick! ;)
Fraser Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 7:40 AM
A little bit of Happy Easter Monday writing Casarah, glad you liked it, James :) :)
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