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One Who Survives

One Who Survives Beer cans rattle empty across wet yellow lines. Smoking metal…junkyard ready: Three dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/13/2016 3:48:00 PM
Gerard, congratulations on your placement in survivor contest!!!
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
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Date: 2/12/2016 12:08:00 AM
Such a sad story well told. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:31:00 PM
GERARD, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:07:00 PM
Very real.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Gerard.
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:32:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, dear Gerard, with this excellent Cinquain. Elaine
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sad, tragic story. But for the Grace of God, there go I... Well-written sharing of how it could be, was, is. Thank you.
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:21:00 AM
Terrible tragedy, Gerard, but well done in the cinquain contest.
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