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One Who Survives

One Who Survives Beer cans rattle empty across wet yellow lines. Smoking metal…junkyard ready: Three dead.

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2016 3:48:00 PM

Gerard, congratulations on your placement in survivor contest!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2016 5:25:00 PM

Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/12/2016 12:08:00 AM

Such a sad story well told. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 10:31:00 PM

GERARD, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2016 10:07:00 PM

Very real.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Gerard.

Elaine George

Date: 2/11/2016 12:32:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, dear Gerard, with this excellent Cinquain. Elaine

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/11/2016 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this sad, tragic story. But for the Grace of God, there go I... Well-written sharing of how it could be, was, is. Thank you.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/11/2016 10:21:00 AM

Terrible tragedy, Gerard, but well done in the cinquain contest.