Notes About The Poem

Fictional, written in the first person, but based on the true
manifestations of a family member with Parkinson's. 
With Parkinson’s disease, psychosis, visual hallucinations, 
and delirium are common.

For The Contest, " Body Possesion Horror"  Sponsor, Michael Fulkerson

 

One Victim Among Many

Before me, faces wear an angry stare,
   and chills now travel up and down my spine.
      Transfixed, immobile, my eyes soon declare
the people there had surely crossed death's line.

Those faces, I have seen back in my past;
   an EMT, I watched them pronounced dead.
      My tension grows, tormented and harassed,
by visions that appear outside my head.

They point their fingers, and I know not why.
   I feel accused and crouch down to the floor,
      fast shut my eyes, as if they would comply
to go away; then open- there are more.

Hallucinations- now they come with ease-
     my mind- possessed by Parkinson's disease.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Fowler Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:11 AM
A true dramatic possession Sandra. Congratulations! :)
Koplin Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 8:11 PM
So happy you dug out this masterpiece from the year 2018, I see. Congrats on your win, Sandra
Barden Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:10 AM
This is wonderful, my friend, and I was pleased to know that you do not have this horrible disease. Best wishes and sincere congratulations for your win in Maureen's contest, Sandra - keep up the great work, and I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory, for your visit and very supportive comments. I appreciate them so much. Wishing you and yours a blessed holiday season too! Sandra :) <3
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. Well done.
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Thank you, Line, for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Barden Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Very poignant and beautiful - love this, and I must fav! Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved win, Sandra - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory, for your visit to my poem and for your lovely comments. I appreciate it so much. Sandra :)
Roper Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Sandra, nicely done verse & great imagery. My dad & grandma had Parkinson and my dad did have hallucinations. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your very uplifting support and congrats. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Back with well deserved congrats on your top win, Sandra. Bravo.
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Neumann Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Congratulations. Thank you for sharing this. On a practical note, hallucinations of Parkinson's Disease sufferers are not so well known by the 'healthy. And what needs to be said, needs to be said...
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much for your visit, Kai, and for your supportive words and congratulations. Most only know about the motor problems. Not all, but many patients experience cognitive dysfunction too. Sandra
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 10:44 AM
This is so well done, though sad to think of someone seeing this dark illusion as a result of illness! Congratulations Sandra
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Carrie, for your congratulations and supportive comment. Yes, one of the horrible symptoms experienced by some with this disease. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 12:37 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your with such a touching poem.
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Thank you, Subimal, for your congratulations and nice comments. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Good poem, but how horrible for the poor patients. Hallucinations must be so disconcerting. Good luck in the contest.
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes, for your visit and supportive comments. Yes, horrible for patients. Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 7:15 PM
This is very well written expressed Sandra and good information I never knew about this disease that afflicts a family member. Best wishes for the contest for this is a real winner.
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, Sian. Yes, so many horrible symptoms can be experienced with this illness. Thank you for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Great poem on the theme of hallucinations. Well done, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you so much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
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